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accident prone, boring protagonist, Crystal, facebook, fixer upper, goals, Nano, NaNoWriMo, new ideas, Plotting, proactive characters, rewriting, writing
Oh deary me reader, what a crazy few weeks it’s been.
Illness, birthday’s, stormy weather and NaNoWriMo
November isn’t over, but it has certainly been all over me. I’ve been to a writing course in Sydney, decided to go to the UK for a writing retreat and then got sick. All the while with NaNoWriMo playing in the back ground and my story so not working out.
Two days ago I decided my NaNo project simply was a disaster. I think being sick and having a passive goal for my main character made for a bit fat 40,000 words of boring.
Boring, boring, boring. And I figured if I was bored with it, what would you think? The same I’d imagine. My MC, Crystal is her name, was doing nothing but moping around. Let’s face it, everyone likes to mope for a bit. But 40K of moping is simply too much for any muse to put up with. I didn’t know what was wrong with her. Crystal spent all day moaning and having long passages of internal dialogue. Yep, enough to make you long to watch paint dry. I won’t say grass grow, because it’s growing quite quickly around here after all the rain we’ve had. Sorry, off topic there.
And being the dedicated little Facebook dudette that I am, I made an announcement. I gave up and with both hands held high, surrendered.
Then I thought “But hey, Crystal needs a goal” I suddenly realised. Yes, it was sudden, I’ve been sick, OK? I realised she was doing nothing but waiting. Waiting is boring enough without having to write about it. So, I came up with a new idea. I gave Crystal something she wanted. Instead of letting her cool her heals waiting for time to pass, I decided she might just having something to offer the world instead of simply waiting for things to be handed to her on a silver salver.
Beautiful. I’m happy, and even better, Crystal’s happy. Poor darling, she was as bored as the rest of us.
So now, here I am, putting 40,000 words aside and starting again. I am vain enough to be willing to keep the first 40K until after NaNoWriMo is finished. I’m starting again, but adding to my word count. There are several bits that I will be able to reuse and refine. So it’s not a total waste. The good thing about writing is you can start again. They are only words, they can be deleted.
As an aside, my morning has been a tad chaotic. If you and I aren’t Facebook friends, (well you can look me up) but you may not know that I have, so far today:
- Waved goodbye to my husband for a few weeks
- Discovered my darling cat Mr Ferrol Flynn was sick
- Had my hammock chair break and the timber spreader bar come down and whack my in the nose, resulting in a bleeding and very sore nose, scratched new glasses and worst of all, spilt coffee
- Been to the vet with poor Flynn, who is ok, apparently must have had a bit of a fight with a feral cat and been bitten, so had an infection
- Slipped in the bathroom when the phone rang and I got out of the shower to answer it
- Burned the roof of my mouth on over-nuked left overs
It’s been a long day, and I still managed to re-jig my plot, scribble a mind map and create parallel narrative arc’s for both new and improved plots in my story.
So, how about you, how’s your Monday going so far? Mine’s been good and bad, but in the spirit of getting with my American friends, I’ll take the Thanksgiving option and be thankful for the good that has come from the day.
Ouch! Some days just aren’t worth getting up — except Flynnie needed you (yes, he’s sharpening his claws to get me for the emasculating name). I’m sorry you’ve had a rough day…
But WOW! I love that mind map! Took a good look at it. I do something similar with my characters when I need some inspiration; find out what they love, hate, fear, want most and it seems to move things along. Hope Crystal gets what she wants most and isn’t bored. I was afraid she was about to come to Hawaii and hang out, naked, on the sign that says “No Public Nudity.” (There really is one — and a nude beach not to far away).
My Monday will start tomorrow. I always have a hard time getting the week started when I’ve been lazy over the weekend. Okay, it was grocery shopping for Thanksgiving, and then making homemade dressing (stuffing) and fresh bread for the holiday weekend. Two big jobs out of the way that I don’t have to do Wednesday (something to be thankful for) and more time to write.
Be safe and keep getting better. No slipping in the bathroom; the phone is never an emergency. Love you and so thankful for laughter and your friendship, and a Ferrol Flynn who keeps everyone entertained.
Deb
Oh thanks Deb, for you never-ending support and encouragement. Well I guess there’s always plenty of excitement happening around here. Gives me lots of fodder for the writing 🙂 And after it’s all over, it’s all good for a laugh.
I have just one word for you Paula Beaven: “Crikey!!!”
Holy Cow you’ve been through a bad time. I thought things only happened in threes – you just blew that myth out of the water.
Very clever post – sounds like you’ve found out a great way to solve those MS problems. I still WILL get to SITW… I just have to get silly old Fairway finished first…
Take care of yourself. Please don’t climb any ladders!
Lily M
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(okay – so I had a few more words than one).xx
Ha ha Lily, thanks for popping in. I’m still nutting out the details to fix Raven’s Ridge but it’s coming along now. As for my health and well being? Mmm, my sister posted on Facebook that she had an ambulance on standby today 🙂